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Drabble (vigbean): Requiem

  • Aug. 24th, 2008 at 4:23 PM
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Title: Requiem
Author: [info]lievv
Fandom: Lotrips
Pairing: Sean Bean/Viggo Mortensen
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: This didn't happen.
Summary: Disconnections.

The phone rings. His breath catches in his throat when he checks his caller ID. Sean. He hesitates for no more than a second.

The phone stops ringing.



His cell phone rings. Sean freezes, needing less than a second to recognize the ring tone. Needn’t check the screen. He does anyway.

The phone stops ringing eventually.


~


There’s no message. Just a harsh beeping sound indicating that he can either leave a message or try again later.

Sean hangs up.



A female voice. “You’ve reached Sean and Georgina. We’re not available right now. Please leave a message.”

Viggo hangs up.

Comments

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[info]makamu wrote:
Aug. 24th, 2008 02:51 pm (UTC)
That is what I call painful... But very nicely executed. Thanks for posting :9
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[info]lievv wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2008 02:06 pm (UTC)
thank you for reading and commenting, glad you enjoyed it.
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[info]rifleman_s wrote:
Aug. 24th, 2008 03:24 pm (UTC)
My heart sank with Viggo's - very well thought out.

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[info]lievv wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2008 02:07 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much!
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[info]wynterhawk wrote:
Aug. 24th, 2008 04:09 pm (UTC)
Ooo... a hard punch to the gut, that, eh? Poor boy.
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[info]lievv wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2008 02:07 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading and commenting!
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[info]mooms wrote:
Aug. 25th, 2008 09:13 am (UTC)
So sad, but so well done!
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[info]lievv wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2008 02:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you, so glad to hear you enjoyed it!
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[info]caras_galadhon wrote:
Aug. 25th, 2008 09:58 pm (UTC)
Oh, ow. You've packed so much pain and chaos into so few words. Very nicely done.
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[info]lievv wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2008 02:08 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much, for both reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it!
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[info]rotpunkt wrote:
Aug. 28th, 2008 08:09 pm (UTC)
Ahhh! No! - It's bitter, but you did a very good job catching the tragedy in these few laconic words.
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[info]lievv wrote:
Aug. 30th, 2008 07:03 am (UTC)
Thank you, really glad to hear you enjoyed it!
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[info]sparkedbylore wrote:
Aug. 30th, 2008 06:37 pm (UTC)
Oh that just hurts. Beautiful! Thank you.
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[info]lievv wrote:
Aug. 30th, 2008 07:22 pm (UTC)
Thank you for reading & commenting. I'm happy to hear this worked for you!
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[info]msilverstar wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2008 06:54 am (UTC)
Wow, that really is an effective drabble, I like what you didn't say.
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[info]lievv wrote:
Sep. 1st, 2008 08:18 pm (UTC)
*blushes* Thanks so much, very happy to hear you liked it!
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